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Poetry

Labbaik: The Journey of Submission

Labbaik: The Journey of Submission is a reflective poem inspired by the history and rituals of Hajj. From the sacrifice and trust of Prophet Ibrahim (PBUH) and his family to the final sermon of Prophet Muhammad (PBUH), the poem highlights themes of obedience, tawheed, mercy, unity, and devotion to Allah that continue to guide millions of believers today—reminding readers of the timeless lessons carried within every step of the pilgrimage.

Qudsia Khan 4 min read 756 words

Prophet Ibrahim (PBUH)1 was commanded by His Lord one day

To leave his wife Hajar (RA)2 with baby Ismaeel (PBUH) in Mecca and walk away

No water, no food, no soul in sight, no place to hide

An empty space between two mountains, dry and wide

A baby crying, a mother running, her tongue moist in prayer

Between Safa and Marwah, searching for water everywhere

By Allah’s will, Zamzam gushed beneath the baby’s feet there

An endless stream of water flowing till the end of time, a sacred sign

Desperate footsteps now a ritual we all share

Echoed in prayer, performing Sa’i at Hajj with care

“Labbaik Allahumma Labbaik”, hearts raised in prayer

“Here I am, O Allah, here I am”, souls in Your care

Allah called Ibrahim (PBUH) once again, to build His House with care

Father and son raised the Kaabah together, stone by stone laid bare

When it was complete, they raised their hands to the All-Hearing in prayer

“Our Lord accept from us,” their voices lifted in the air

Then Allah commanded Ibrahim (PBUH) “And proclaim to mankind the Hajj”3, to worship Him alone 

The qiblah of our worship, praising the Lord upon His Throne

Where all stand equal, a cornerstone of unity

Millions gather, young and old from every community

“Labbaik Allahumma Labbaik”, hearts raised in prayer

“Here I am, O Allah, here I am”, souls in Your care

Now wrapped in black and gold so bright

Guiding every pilgrim toward Allah’s eternal light

We stand as one direction, one purpose clear

As if the House itself whispers, “Your Lord is always near”

We circle around the Kaabah with devotion and sincere emotion

Like planets around their sun in a peaceful motion

We walk between two mountains, where a mother once ran fast

Remembering her trust in God, a story meant to last

“Labbaik Allahumma Labbaik”, hearts raised in prayer

“Here I am, O Allah, here I am”, souls in Your care

Ismaeel (PBUH) grew stronger by his father’s side

Learning patience, strength, and a faith that would soon be tried

Then came a dream too heavy for a father’s heart to bear and do

“O my son, I see in a dream that I must sacrifice you”4

And Ismaeel (PBUH) replied in submission, surrendered fully to the decree laid bare

“O my dear father! Do as you are commanded. Allah willing, you will find me patient there”5

When they both submitted putting their trust in Al-Hakeem, with hearts sincere in prayer

“You have already fulfilled the vision”6 was the answer there

Then a ram was sent as mercy from Ar-Rahman

“And we ransomed his son with a great sacrifice”7, truly by Allah’s perfect plan

And till this day, millions travel thousands of miles to arrive

After the day of Arafah, on Eid ul Adha, the sacrifice comes alive

It’s not only about sacrificing an animal 

It’s about leaving behind desires, the pride within us all

It’s about letting go of habits that lead us astray

And choosing to please Allah, every single day

“Labbaik Allahumma Labbaik”, hearts raised in prayer

“Here I am, O Allah, here I am”, souls in Your care

But time would cover the truth that echoed everywhere

Idols entered the House, few remembered what was there

Until Prophet Muhammad (PBUH) restored Ibrahim’s prayer

And Tawheed returned—back to its core once more

“Labbaik Allahumma Labbaik”, hearts raised in prayer

“Here I am, O Allah, here I am”, souls in Your care

We stand upon Arafah, beneath the open sky

Where the Prophet’s (PBUH) final sermon reminded us of our purpose high

To purify our souls, to connect with our Creator

To understand His Book, and live by His words for a destination greater

No race above another, the Prophet (PBUH) did testify

Calling us to justice, mercy, and truth that cannot die

We throw stones at Shaytan, rejecting his whispered call

We sacrifice in gratitude, as Ibrahim once stood tall

Knowing Allah sees our hearts, and knows our every deed

And when the journey ends, our souls feel new indeed

Hajj is returning to Allah, and finding yourself freed

So do not delay—return to Him, for He is all you need

“Labbaik Allahumma Labbaik”, hearts raised in prayer

“Here I am, O Allah, here I am”, souls in Your care


1 Peace be upon him

2 May Allah (SWT) be pleased with her

3  Quran 22:27

4  Quran 37:102

5 Quran 37:102

6 Quran 37:105

7 Quran 37:107

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Qudsia Khan

Contributor, The Wellness Press